(reflection) Feedback from Draft 3:

Things that I received from audience feedback:

- The Spine we found was brilliant to foreshadow that something was wrong.
- The script was very natural and talkative between both actors. However, would like it if it was a bit more 'teenage like' and a bit more mischievous.
- The birds also signified that something was wrong which is good.
- The battery Foley effect was good too.

- The actors head was cut out of most scenes... would like it if the shots were more focused on his face than the ground.

- Make the camera focused on everything... perhaps not use a DSLR camera.....

- Location is great for this type of genre.

- Many different shots need to be used. like pans and close ups. this gets more of a feel of the genre and different specific things.